He's got the same look I do when I go outside after days of emo darkness on Youtube. xD
Can't. Stop. Watching. Stupid videos.~ o.e
(It's awesome, Im so Jelly!)
Like the coloring and the uses of shadow, however would be cool if you made what he was looking at more... Umm amazing? Idk how to describe it, also it may not match your style to be more detailed then that so... yeah good job. lol