Nice characters
So here was some nice chaeracter detail the shine on the skin-tone was nice, I think some even more added shine and even a pinch of sparkle would be nice aswell as some more backround detail like props and such, but beyond that mentioned you have done a swell job here.
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I think some even more added shine and even a pinch of sparkle would be nice aswell as some more backround detail like props and such
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