Zen-Zudokai A warrior finds her determination...
Hello my friend. I don't know how long this song has been and if it has been here for a while I'm sorry for the late review. This piece was quite difficult to write a story for. I thought, and thought, and thought some more before it finally hit me. (Get's icepack for wound on head ;( ) Here it is. A young woman is training in the forest. She is training hard and harder still till the point to where her body can take the training no further. As she is doing double-skips on a jumprope she suddenly trips and slams her head against a oak tree and falls down. As she slowly gets up recovering from the fall her teacher comes from behind a tree. "So...taking a break already eh?" She gets up and says to her teacher in a brash manner, "What do you want master? If it's about the blunder I just made I'll just train harder to improve!" The master smiles and shakes his head and says, "No. I just wanted to give you congraduations for all the work you've done in the village. You think...you think yourself to be weak but you really are strong. " The woman kicks the oak tree repeated times in anger. She's heard that line before. "You're just saying that, like everyone else, just to be nice!! I'm still weak! Only through training will I be able to be strong!! I'm not a master of anything...I keep thinking about my brother...how when I first fought him and how I lost miseribly. I get so scared thinking about facing him again...and think that if I train three or four times as much as I used to that I might finally defeat him. But...whenever I think of that fight, I get the feeling that things will be no different. It scares me so much that my body trembles at the thought! That no matter how much I train that I'll never be as strong as him!" Tears steams down the young woman's face and the master closes his eyes in deep understanding. Suddenly his eyes open and they blaze fiercely with intense fire before he shouts, "ALL YOUR TRAINING WILL PROVE UTTERELY WORTHLESS...UNLESS YOU BELIEVE IN YOURSELF!!!" The woman raises her head and her master whispers, "I give hope to your kind..." The warrior turns around and whispers back, "And...I never kept any...for myself." No matter what the situation, no matter how hard a piece might seem to be able to create, remember Maestro and all of Newgrounds. All of your practicing will prove worthless unless you truly belive in yourselves! Look into the storm and shout, "Do your worst! For I will do mine!" Keep up the good work...
phoenixfirex 