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Reviews for "Do Not Disturb - NGADM 2020 - R3"

Sounds really cool. Would make good music for an emotional video game cutscene or short film.

Mackievellian responds:

Thanks, man. I kept thinking of an anime outro and can hear it as nothing else lol.

Official NGADM Review for Round 3.

That intro is honestly soooo good! It gets the listener in the mood, and then BAM! HERE TIMMY CHECK OUT THIS ROCK BALLAD! It's just so good in terms of its composition, keeping itself fresh and even working well with a change of tone in the middle. The sound design here is really good, and the production value is also a knock out of the park.
My critiques? I think that while the sound design is really good, there can definitely be some improvements made to it, mainly coming from the lullaby portion. I thought the music box and flute were a little too bright, but that might be just what I've gotten used to in terms of how music boxes and flutes sound lol. To me, it just distracted me only a little bit, and they are smaller problems that really don't overshadow the entire piece. One other thing that I will mention, and this isn't really affecting your score, is that I felt the delay rate could be slower - rather than being closer to a quarter note value, it might be worth experimenting bringing them to the value of a dotted eighth instead. Again, though, that's just a personal preference that isn't going to affect your score.
Overall, this is suuper good! The two different tones achieved in one piece with similar melodies is hard to pull off well, but I think you did it wonderfully! Great job!

Mackievellian responds:

Amazing, thank you. I actually had it set to a dotted value before but changed it due to it sounding like a three over four polyrhythm, lol. Thank you very much for this feedback, and the kind words, man.

I wish I'd had more time to listen to the music coming out of the Audio Deathmatch this year sooner. This is amazing.

Mackievellian responds:

Thanks so much, man.

Still amazes!

Edit: I never left... and perhaps :)

Mackievellian responds:

Yooo haha you came back! Cheers phono, see you in the discord sometime aye?

How right would I be to guess you're a David Maxim Micic fan? :D
Amazing stuff, man. Blown away. No comment necessary. <3

Mackievellian responds:

Actually never listened man but I'll check it out! Thanks for the awesome comment friend