meh...
yeah, that was really pretty and all but....it lacked originality, and what's with that loooong boring author's comment? you're trying to make something that looks and smells kick ass but then you look like an eleven yea old dbz/pokemon/yugioh/daft punk wanna be hipster with that corny sci fi story, then shoving a whole bunch of flashy 3-d props in my face like i'm watching an episode of reboot. stick to what you know. all in all however, the production looked fabulouse, all i can really put you down for is the fact that you gotta higher a writer. lol, sorry if this weak plot happens to be your life's work or something.