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the first two installments were very well done. Now you're trying to get too indpeth with the story. the little stickman radio relay was over done and too fucking long. keep to the basics, don't try to get too narrow a theme. Oh and as a hint? A magnum research desert eagle doesn't have a conventional slide. the barrel is fixed, the back end actually is the breach. If your gonna trysomething more detailed, stick to the original story and emphasize your animation.get it? got it? good.