My views
Alone, you wander through the hills and plains, enshrouded in endless darkness. The sun is gone...there is only darkness. And the wind...it wisps gently across the grass, causing it to rustle slightly in the gentle breeze. But the sound of the wind is anything but friendly...it's as if the wind is mocking you. You stand atop the hill, trying to find any sign of life around you. But there is no one...there is nothing...just you, atop the hill, all alone. The only sound you can hear is the sound of the slight breeze in the air. But you're not alone...there is someone following you...someone you can't see...someone you don't know. You continue through the plains, searching...hoping you can find a sign of the one who is tracking you. But you see nothing...you are not alone...but you are endlessly stalked by someone you can not see...someone you will never find...left to wander the dark night forever.
It's very a very chilling piece, but I enjoy it very much. Keep it up!