You really put effort into this, didn't you?
This is a sorry excuse for a flash. You look like you know what you're doing, but the graphics were sub-par, the sound sucked (even if not taking into account the fact that I don't like the music) and there was no plot and no joke to speak of. The only thing worth watching was that bat animation.
Hmmm?
That was kinda short lol If you were planning on continuing the story, you could of done it one shot. Didn't like the music, it was more boring electro-EBM/techno or whatever than Industrial. I did however like the graphics, nice drawings. I found the "father" a bit humorous though, always finding one in your local Fetish or Vampyre club. Over all I think each episode should be longer/more content (my main complaint), and I may not like the music, but thats just personal taste.
And to the person below me, obviously this persons never been to a fetish night and/or private dungeon (some filled with yuppies, ick :b). They do exist, just not excessible to 14 yr olds ;) and you'll find electrical taped nipples galore.
Erm...ok
Like the review said before no reference to sucide is good =)
But Whats up with the crosses on the nipples not all goths go around with crosses and pentagons etc on them.
Good drawing though
What the fuck?
Right, because this one makes much more sence. All goth clubs are like that, hm? Um.. no.
Maybe this one is a little better than the other one, but only because it has no reference to suicide in it. You still have the Gothic sub-culture all wrong, we're not all gay and bi people that flirt like mad with each other and wear very very little.
Points for trying, but it still sucked arse. 0
still way too short
I must be getting old, Instead of looking for a big boob lesbo goth mnchfest I was interested in looking for some kind of plot, story arc or something.
How about putting a few easter eggs in there? I think it was Hightail Hall
that was really good in that way. As long as you didn't get the fox.