A Dorky cool kid eh? Who got a dope armour suit from a ... a what? A dying alien? Wow, isnt that just amazing(ly unoriginal)!
Nonetheless, the graphics are quite good, so that made up for the piece. What programs did you use to make this?
Nonetheless, as a few other reviewers said, why don't you change the plot round a bit, as it's obviously trying to be 'Wacky' and 'cool'.
I think this does have the potential to get a TV contract.
My idea is, if you do try this again, why don't you mention NewGrounds and show them some of the reviews. 'Oh I got 50000 views, won the portal award, and uh, was a daily feature' or something like that. It would look impressive I think and they might know New Grounds.
Anyhow, good luck, whatever you decide to do. I think your flash movies are 'dope'.