Hee-hee... I know where your humor is...
I like it! It's okay that you don't speak Engilsh very well ^^ I'm here to help, not bash.
... A little constructive criticism?
The title would be "Going too far up".
*Sonic jumps on the spring*
Sonic: ??????? What the hell?
*Enter Tails*
Tails: What's wrong?
Sonic: The fucking spring won't work!
Tails: Let's see... haa ha! I found the 'on' button! If I push this button...
Sonic: *flies up*
Tails: It should be working now! *looks around* Sonic? Oops...
"GAME OVER."
Just minor stuff. It was funny BTW. XD