This is really good, Johnfn (if that is your real name)! Nice to hear some singing and guitars and pianos and things from you! That backwards guitar thing at 0:43 sounds super nice. Oh and that I III IV V (I think) progression toward the end feels really uplifting and good. :D
There's a couple things I'd like to suggest to make this even more amazing - if you want to hear it, I can do it in private, or I can edit this comment so that everyone can see. Or I can keep it to myself entirely :3
Nice work. I <3 u