OK this ONLY gets a 9 because the mix was muddy. You need to bring out the higher frequencies more. On another note this song reminds me of Texarkana by REM (alot of the chord progression is similar).
All I really need to say is if you sorted out the mix then this tune would be PERFECT, the instrumentation is on point (drums are lacking a bit though, I know they're meant to be submissive but you could've chosen better sounds for it), the composition is great but sometimes it feels like the piano isn't repetitive enough, like it doesn't have enough breathing space but that's only in the beginning when the piano's without accompaniment, it's hardly noticeable after the other instruments kick in.
Sick tune. One of the best I've ever heard anywhere. This has chart potential.
Oh well, enjoy the hell that is near perfection :P