Woah, fell asleep. What happened.
I missed quite a bit of that, but what i could keep my head up to look at seemed a lot like crap. Take away the shape tweening with 4 solid blocks of color, and all you have is an amature poem. Amazing. Maybe if I didn't understand how easy it is to shape tween, or how bad of a poem that was, I might give you a good review. If you could respond with how many pages that poem was, that would be great. I think it was on the verge of a book.