the song feels like it's generally low cut / badly mastered, and is kind of empty I guess.
Sound design : wtf are those horns ? the lead is very screamy in the intro. I think the sound design is too simple in general, for example at 02:04. But chords are great and melodious.
So overall what you need to work on is mix/mastering, sound design, and working on filling entirely the song. Chords are nice tho