I liked it! It was different than most everything here. It was a good break from heavy metal and electronica!
It seems that you have a pop-star vocal complex. That means that you sing like a diva rather than a rock singer.
I like the guitar part! Sometimes it didn't mesh well with the vocals, though.
This song was... kind of emo. Newgrounds doesn't really like emo, so try writing other lyrics. Also, sing a bit clearer next time.
Otherwise, it was good! Keep it up!