Interesting, spacious piece. I'm having a bit of a time judging due to hardware issues on my end.
Mix is a bit reverb heavy for my tastes. That wet has a messy tail on it. Tone it down a bit.
2:21, that hi-hat splashing could probably do with being shut a bit tighter.
Compositionally, I enjoy your lead writing. 3:18 chugging section was a bit abrupt for my taste, and I would like to hear a bit more of your leads. Mix wise, they were occasionally a bit washed out.
Your drums, with the exception of the toms, sound pretty flat. Kick is a bit flabby -- tuip-tuip-y. Snare also leaves room for improvement. I want to hear more of that top head ringing. Never be afraid to apply tape saturation/EQ/etc. to fatten up a snare. A nice 80's-ish snare sample might have even done the job if you blended it with the current sample.
Panning was pretty natural to my ears.
Cymbals were hiding in the mix. I'd take them up just a bit.
I also didn't like how disjointed 4:41 sounded from the rest of the track as a whole. It would have made a better bridge than an outro.
Overall, pretty good power metal, a couple hiccups in structure, tension, and release. Melody is fairly catchy, but it's missing that little something to give it some wow to go with the weird. As is, still jammin' though. Nice work!
Thanks for coming out to NGUAC!