Reviews for F-777 Dark Shire Dance Mix

[Music-story]

what's this? new song...review

well I found out you posted a new song so I'll review this too. The starting happy synth is funky. The song starts slow but when the bass comes in than much better stuff. I see your using harmonies and they are playing different stuff. That's good stuff. I guess kudos to your friend for the composition and a clap to you for making it sound much better. Just piano might have been a tad boring to hear. The song is quite clear...at least to my speakers. Suggestions...hmm well hard to say. I like the atmosphere synths. Maybe the start of the song could have used some improvement. Transition quicker to the action stuff with the bass. So 5/5 voting raising your score..yah and 10/10 review. Hope my suggestion helped you out. I'm easy to please so I lack criticism usually. Oh and effort is still good, but not a 10 since you didn't make the song from scratch..your friend started it for you. Bye for now

F-777 responds:

Thank you so much for the comment!

[paradiddlesjosh]

There's a few issues, but a good mix nonetheless.

I like the melodies of this mix. I think the opening synth was fine. I'm really not sure what would fit there better, so I think it's fine as-is.

I couldn't hear what instrument you were using for a snare/clap. That thing was too low to be heard. You can feel when it comes in, but the ears feel betrayed. If you can tweak your percussion instruments, perhaps you might try upping the pitch on the snare/clap a tone or two.

Very good mix, though, so no worries there. More people should definitely listen to your music.
~Joshy676

F-777 responds:

I agree percussion wasn't properly set =P. Thanks so much for the awesome review!

[R-VeeBee]

The intro is a bit lame..

I don't like the sound of the pweep-pweep thingy. It's too.. loud or something. I don't know.. It doesn't work with the rest! The background synths later in the track are very cool. Nice melodies overall! Cool build-up. Only not in a diverse way, that's too bad.. But the build-up idea overall is cool.

The quality is.. well better than 'Memories' but still not very good.. but alright

Overall a nice idea and nice melodies. Pretty cool beats too. Should be more diversity in those beats.

Peace,
R-VeeBee

F-777 responds:

Thanks! Ya my other friend complained about the "bweep-bweep" sound...oh well thats my stupid mistake for choosing it. Thanks for the review!