It was a really good heavy metal song, it brings back memories of when I used to listen to this kind of stuff a lot.
The vocals were great, along with the guitar part. I felt that the bass wasn't strong enough and the drums needed more "oomph." I hope you know what I mean.
The part where you say "yeah, bring it, yeah, sing it" you sound slightly bored. Try and put a bit of spark in your voice next time.
It was a great song though. One of the first heavy metal songs I've heard here with good vocals AND instrumentation.
Keep up the good work!!
-A Navij11 Review