Awesome work! I really liked that Lara volunteered for the machine, it's a nice twist on the usual set up to this style of scenario.
Voice acting and dialogue were fantastic, there was a really quirky comedic tone that went great with the action.
I liked the build up to the machine as well, having the camera pulled back at the start was a nice way to raise anticipation. It's almost like the viewer is trying to get a better look at the device whilst peeking on a private test run.
It'd be cute to see more scenarios where the girls are enthusiastic to test out machines!