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so from the get-go I really thought this was good, and I was unexpectedly taken back with how good it really was, so that for sure shows your effort and time put into this, There are various ideas and tips you could go about and make this even better, maybe some added subtitles but honestly its good as is too Now criticisms aside Its a decent flash entry shows your skills and effort.
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maybe some added subtitles but also good as is.
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