Good: calm start. Nice little drop. Great beat. Very addictive song. Larger build up later in the song. Followed by another one. I think I hear guitars. And a lovely fade.
What needs work: the voice chops. I think there are too much of them but I guess I'll live it down. Also some stuff goes unnoticed like we're you trying to add another beat. Unfortunately someone stuff was drowned out and I had to listen too the song again to hear them.
My advice: maybe less voice chops and also keep up the lovely rhythms.