A master hand/chainchomp baddie!
It's nice to see the blue wonder in motion after having commented on her design earlier.
I think you as visual story teller have a great sense of scale, and pacing, and the only thing I could really ask is a drop or two of more detail because you draw a beutiful world.
I would have also loved to have seen more from such an interesting monster design, but I am very satisfied with what we got.
Thank you for making this.
Reviews for "Chaotic Heart: First Encounter"
9Hammer responds:
Thank you Putney! I can definitely enhance the details a bit more to help the background environments, and I appreciate the comment too!
I enjoyed it a lot, but my only issue is that the animation goes really quickly at one point, then pauses for two or three seconds in what I assume is an attempt to let things be taken in. It's a cool animation technique, letting moments be more impactful, but using it over and over, one right after another takes away from that a little bit. Some things could be sped up and let the animation smooth out a little between specific action scenes, but other than that I thought you did fairly well!
9Hammer responds:
Ah, I see what you mean with the usage of the lulls in animation. It can appear to cause some pacing issues in the fight scenes. I'll make sure to take that into consideration! Thank you for the comment!
is it visually appealing? yes, but that seems to be all that this movie has going for it. the animatic style animation is choppy and boring to look at. the characters look very similar even if their design is good, there should be some contrast. and the music is minimal while the sound effects are okay at best. My favorite part was the chain breaking but you can do better- PUSH YOURSELF
9Hammer responds:
I appreciate the critiques on the character designs and animation. I'll do my best to working towards improving those aspects in the long run!
Wow! I really Enjoyed this one! Nice visuals, sounds, music and cool scenes! Here's hoping for more!
Like a few people before me. Animation and visual storytelling is awesome but the sound and music could use a little work.