Fucking brilliant this.
Reviews for "Serpent City"
That was cute
Her new goal: see if zombie Chris Evans is single.
Feels like the last part is a dream since she is now dead after the zombie that snuck up bit her.
Would be cool at the very end to see a glimpse of her as a zombie from the pov of the fallen camcorder's dirty lens.
Good work.
Reply: Glad you like it. You can continue the story with someone else. Another lady finds the camera and bunker, watches the various recordings and life of Zoe, whilst they themselves traverse the zombie wasteland. The video Zoe will be the new persons companion on the journey, figuratively. Thus Zoe is still "alive" to us, while we have the story of the new person.
It's not impossible, you obviously have the skills to make it happen.
DampOwl responds:
Man, I actually like that idea.
I can't say it was the intention though - this is intended to be a pilot for an ongoing story so it wouldn't work to kill her right away. Still, not a bad idea for an ending!
This is so savage. The savagery is so there...yeah....