- Music is nice
- Drawing style is original
- Nice concept of "choose your own adventure" style, plus interesting idea of soling riddles. I just hope that they're wont be something skill related harder than the lockpick. It was a nice addition, but if it gets tougher, can be annoying.
- Simple but endearing story and characters
- It's nice to see a chubby yet sexy character
So, how to improve it...
- MAKE MOAR
- Serously though... I dont know. Maybe add an exploration thing or character building thing, since it's after all a "dungeon crawling"... But if that's not the objective of the game, totally fine.
Thanks for your hard work !