Why is she bald? did she lose a bet? Other than that, good game. And going forward will there be an option with magic hell powers to give her a full head of hair?
Reviews for "Inkubak - Ep 1&2 (18+)"
BozR responds:
She has short hair lol, I have something like https://media.glamour.com/photos/599c87e92b2de7315b9671b3/master/h_1025,c_limit/Pixie-Cut-Zoe-Kravitz.jpg in mind - though I got that a lot, so I'm considering something for the next update ^_^
loved the game the story and art were amazing , so i had played ep1 before when i had got an error so playing both episodes was fun, i have only slight issue i am losing all my saves after i quit the game and return next day but it is showing me saves from ep1 when i had played it then not the latest saves
BozR responds:
Glad you liked it! :)
PM me your browser specs (name, version, operating system) and I'll investigate (it works for me).
As a work-around, you can always export your savegames as a .zip from the top-left menu and import them back later.
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I see potential for this project, shame I cannot support it directly. Didn't even notice this was both EP 1&2 until I looked at my tab.
Positives
- Art:
I really like the style and I'm certain not many will be a fan of it 2D or not, the way the three characters express themselves (exception to protag) are effective. Be it that INK is pissed or my personal favorite, (._.) of disappointment made me chuckle and appreciate the aesthetic you're going for.
For the moment there isn't too much going on with mostly black screens and red text. I wouldn't mind being able to see what Ink looked like prior to getting Zapped out of his previous form and perhaps having the option of looking at a mirror for progress on certain attributes be it dong or Ink's control. I hope you can add small visuals for when the Guy goes out to make money or grab the condoms.
- Writing
This was one of the bigger highlights of the game so far. The characters while a tad weird I couldn't help be more invested into them. The dialogue felt natural in places and helped me understand what I was supposed to be doing. How Bitche reacted to things were natural for the most part, along with some clues as to what she fantasizes about and another story thread that might be expanded upon in a future episode. What caught me off guard was the humor feeling so natural, made the experience worth going through.
- Gameplay
For a visual novel it kept my attention more than what I'd warrant it. I don't think I'm the target audience for it. I'm happy to say that this is a quality experience to those that can get it more than I can. The means to progress is fairly simple and straightforward along with its plot not being far off being a simple goal of: Become a Chad to restore the Demon Lad. The "mini-game" for the moment it is simple and flows well if you can read the needed movement for pleasure (hint: watch the hearts move).
I have not fully explored the game considering I only reached the end of Episode 2 (I was not aware of the episode transitioning into one or the other). I'm curious as to what the websites may be for, perhaps for other potential situations with other characters or random women. I would however like it if you can check your progress on relationship or Dong so that you can accurately get down with Bitche herself with minimal problems. Though I understand perhaps that will be implemented as this is about a week old since its public release. But to those who want to know the progress, the more he talks about Sleeping Beauty on his own, the better chance of finishing chapter 2.
- Sound
Unfortunately due to a problem with my computer, I cannot judge or wage the quality of sound be it music or other audio. (Headphone port is broken)
Feedback
The experience was better than expected but there were a few things I think could be tweaked or added to help make it a bit more enjoyable or interesting. [Some of these things may have already been considered or currently developed for as we speak or later have been implemented already]:
- The Kitchen
A possibility of building trust by cooking food for B perhaps warm for when it is cold or getting something cold for when the heater is broke like a drink or ice cream. Or making a meal for her should she get sick or feel unwell making her recover faster or more comfort.
- Visuals
I'll keep this quick as I covered this earlier; a lack of visuals from both the epilogue and money get scenes kind of boring. Be it Ink is ramming them hoes or Guy is finding innocuous things to do or towel lifting to improve stamina. Other than that I see no issues with how consistent the art assets have been utilized in this version.
Other than that, I hope this helped and to witness more of your work be it this project or future ones should the people be able to support them. I wish you the best of luck on your endeavors.
BozR responds:
Thanks for this detailed, high-quality and motivating feedback :)
I appreciated that you described both what you liked and disliked, with suggestions.
I understand the wish for more artwork, which I have to balance with actually releasing episodes. Maybe in a "deluxe edition" after the game is finished?
Kitchen action is already underway as part of the next Episode :)
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