Hey that's good!
Hey that's good!
Damn, you tried your best. It looks cool!
I think this animation is pretty awesome to be a first cartoon. The pacing never feels too slow, the blood, bullets, and debris never feels like it was half-baked, the camera isn't sickening like some cartoons and collab pieces from 2018 The only real issue that I can articulate is that some motions are too fast or sudden to appreciate, like Hank throwing a knife at a Soldat. The fact that there's not many specific things I can say are bad are signs you're doing a lot right.
A fantastic effort for your first project, and finally some flexibility to the whole "Otherplace" trend that's been stickin' 'round here so much. It's great to see that new talent is still working its way into this hollow husk of what once was, and hopefully with enough fresh blood we can get this community up and running again.
Not bad! :D