Not bad. I appreciated how the animation is a seamless loop. Hard to find much of those that work well on this site, but you made it work. It's visually pleasing to see the chalky renditions of the characters, but the main subject with the vibrant purple design seemed to visually clash with the surrounding art style. There were some inconsistencies that were a bit distracting with the animation and coloring (an example is the final animated bit with The Potato Fudger with a solid black outline and some lip syncing) but it still maintained a noticeable visual charm throughout. Regardless, I did enjoy some of the humorous bits that you implemented like the continuous front-fliping entrances and the sunroof bit. I believe ironing out some of those kinks would be best, but despite that, I think this is alright!
Reviews for "The Potato Fudger"
daspetey responds:
thank you so much for your feedback!
i completely agree. those are perfect notes. it needs a consistent visual look. i definitely feel like it would benefit from another pass of tightening up. maybe even some variety of shots in the apartments? like close ups on whoever is speaking? and maybe some sound of the car in the beginning smooth things out.
anyway, thanks again!
-pete