I love the character drawing. I loved the story line too. There is a lot of potential here. I think I will begin downloading this in a few versions. This is great. I think a few things could be polished up like the part where the monsters attack his friends right before it ends, kinda fakie looking. But other than that I would polish the graphic quality and extend the story line and that would be great. I loved how I could choose what to say and do. Maybe in the future u might wanna decide what type of game this will be. Weather tipping more towards a rpg or a interact story. I Personaly would love some element of upgrading and I think the other gamers would to, maybe like a type of rpg upgrading fighting blended with a storyline game. I personally love upgrades in my game, weather that be strength of party, dick size or influence like charisma. One idea I have might be that u could upgrade the character to affect storyline outcomes? whatever u put in this game if it reflects your current work you are doing I think it will be great and I wish u luck as u work to improve this game.