while this is not a bad animation by any means, its really stiff and doesn't offer much. If you're going for slap stick/physical comedy you need less in between frames and more emphasis on the beginning and ending of an action. Maybe some stretching or smear techniques to add exaggeration to the movements. I know it can be done in 3D animation its just a matter of finding out the methods that work best for you and your animations.
Hope this helps you out in future projects
Reviews for "Aya's Power Outage"
Great video! Maybe a bit too much noise for the blinking? The noise is great, but it gets a bit much with the rate she blinks. Maybe keeping it to more close-up shots would fix the issue, but it’s more a personal gripe so take that with a grain of salt. However, still adorable regardless of this minor nitpick
Nice job with it look forward to your new pieces
Lol never help her
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Not bad, the art style is interesting.
PenguinPotential responds:
Thanks ^^ I'm going to play with the shading+animation style for future animations~