I love this idea for a game. The web browser idea justifies limiting the player's options without limiting I M M E R S I O N perfectly. It was pretty short (I liked the apparent set up for a conspiracy or secret purpose for the software type plot, without spoiling anything), but all in all a magical experience :D
Reviews for "YumemiSushi"
maruki responds:
Thank you so much for your kind words!
Really charming, for a text based generator in (twine?). I considered docking points for the downloadable ToS but pussy convinced me otherwise. The pixel art was undoubtedly the best part!
secret route left me feeling h u n g r y f o r m o r e
maruki responds:
Thank you for your words! I'm glad pussy convinced you :D Thanks about the pixel art, I'm very fond of it too <3
What a surreal little experience lol. I enjoyed it, mostly the oddity of the questions and the animations you get at the end!
Suggestions:
- All the links in the description are broken. They include the final ")" in the url, which is messing everything up
- Sometimes text is off of the screen and you can barreely see it. But you cannot scroll the viewport to see it. Maybe lower the text size or if twine allows it, add a scrollbar?
maruki responds:
Hey there! I've fixed the scrollbar issue, let me know if it's working for you! Also fixed the links in the descriptions. And thanks for telling me!