This is really amazing work. I've spent an entire evening playing this and I absolutely did not expect that. The art is cute and sexy, the characters are charming and multifaceted, and the jokes are top-notch. This is a gem.
One point of criticism: "g*psy" is a racial slur, targeting the Romani people (you can look this up if you want). I'm not angry or anything as a lot of people don't know this, because the term has become so ingrained in world cultures. But the fact remains that it's connected to racial violence and murder, not to mention discrimination and unjust suspicion. The game is really really good so far about not being offensive, which I applaud you for. I'd really appreciate if you continued with that spirit and just took that word out of Jessie's script, which would change the phrase to "that woman with the oddly specific tarot cards". IMO, that still works because lots of people use tarot cards so anyone could give a reading and I think the joke works just as well that way. Thanks!
Edit: Sage's derisive line of "what a lesbian" is homophobic as well, I'm afraid. It doesn't really fit with the rest of the game, and I'd appreciate if it was cut too.
Edit: The scene where Carmen starts a splinter adventuring party... I'm here too, Faye... :(