Umm
IT was nice and fluent for a while, then it kind of detoriorated into randomness and the storyline was lost.
but since you say it's not finished, good job
Umm
IT was nice and fluent for a while, then it kind of detoriorated into randomness and the storyline was lost.
but since you say it's not finished, good job
Don't worry it makes sense in the end...all in good fun...
Thanks for the vote!