"Hell? No! You go to Dog Heaven. Jeez!"
This is very nice, a good looking game with a great narrative.
This looks really good, a very interesting choice of colours, which I liked very much. I loved the way the narrativa has a non-linear style, it has some very nice ideas in it. I personaly loved the heaven part, that cat angel was pretty funny.
It is great as it is, but I have a few suggestions. Firstly, I think you could make Jesse's sprite turn to the left when he walks in that direction, in the last scene it felt a bit awkward to see him walking back. Secondly, and this is more of just an idea, I thought it could be nice to add some music, perhaps something to build the feel for some areas, such as a jazz tune for the club and some harp for the heaven (it could even be in bitune, to match with the game's style).