Cute
So this was cute the characters are cute, I think you can ad some subtitles on this piece, Ok so I think of this as a big movie event and the people would cheer you on even more, So keep doing what you have been doing its a good start and I can see alot more comming from this, So Kudos on your Imaginative and View of a unique style here.
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I think you can ad some subtitles on this piece
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