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Reviews for "Abbie's Room"
Great game. Other than the dude only getting his dick tip in
So I already have an affinity towards bunnies, redheads and tough looking girls. Now I get to smack and play with this nice combination of all three. good stuff! For sure, not to long or to short but the background and character do show that this is not top shelf animation. YET.
There is room for improvement, however this does not mean this isn't already great. So im looking forward to seeing more from you. Though it doesn't have to be porn :3
Not that I and others mind.
p.s Nice booty (Can't stop spanking this goodness)
Chelodoy responds:
Thank you , im glad you like this bunny :3
a little short but not bad at all
Okay, not bad... in fact, over all, I'd call this good.
It's a bit simple, but you've got something to build on. You're clearly covering the talent/skill part, so anything I might "harsh" about at this point is a matter of style vs. quality...
That said, let's touch the "simple" part. There are a few other commenters pointing out terms like "short" or asking "that's all?"...
You know how to "stack" options, since you stacked the "hand spank" with "anal beads" in the first loop... SO maybe stack two or three options with the dill... like "tease" (barely penetrate) with "slow" (what you already did) and "pump" to pick up the pace and cram them deep... or something similar.
Same could be done with the penis stage, AND as reference, I would suggest you pop into the Movies-search box and type "Mittsies" and check out some of the awesome options/stacks offered in the "Anal Rodeo" sets...
Finally, I'd suggest you give the "cum shot" a "one and done" function, bringing the viewer straight to an "end-card" of some sort... whether it's idle-screwing around... or just a list of credits (whatever floats)... AND stick a "repeat" button on there to bring the whole thing back to a start...
Options and values (being able to turn up and down volumes on sound-track/music) are great add-ons, too... BUT 1. I'm not sure how or where exactly to suggest you find that kind of technical... AND 2. The quality of sound and your editing it together is good enough I think this stands on its own merits in audio, frankly.
Don't forget to breathe, relax, and then keep on keeping on... Artists grow as they build. I believe in you. ;o)