Reviews for Kirby calls out Mario (Animatic)

[PortalVendor]

The voice acting is obnoxiously loud annoying, so loud and annoying I couldn't get through the first 2 minutes of it.

The animation was lacking, it just felt like a bunch of pictures being put out very slowly instead of a cartoon universe.

The script was also lacking, it took them more than a minute to say "you made a new game, Super Mario Odyssey, riiiiight?" and Mario replying with that Kirby also made a recent game.

It shows a little potential but you have to check on pretty much everything to make sure that it intrigues your audience.

Evy-Devy responds:

This isn't really meant to be an animation. I already said so in the description but this is meant to be an animatic, not an animation. Doing animation would not only make this simple video take MUCH longer but also demotivate me while making it. I can understand your frustration though so I changed the title to let people know right away it's not meant to be fluid. (Which is why there's little lip syncing.)

As for the voice acting, if it's too loud, just turn the volume down. But I know that the background music and voice acting is a bit loud. I did raise the voice acting a bit to not be drowned in the background music but I'm still experimenting with sound so I think I'll be lowering the sound a bit from now on.

As for Kirby talking slow, I did think it was a bit slow too but it fits Kirby's character since he is very young.