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Beautiful work

This looks like a blend of charcoal and pencil to me, which makes it very beautiful looking to me. This is a pretty cool looking piece.

Wish I could write better art review because as far as I know I'm horrible with them, but hey we all interpret art in our own unique ways you know?

This is just great though, like how half of it is siding with blue hair and the other half is blue almost like she is always at a struggle with herself or such.

not exactly perfect with being half and half but it is very cool, nice piece of art InsertFunnyUserName!

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InsertFunnyUserName responds:

Thanks :]

Not bad however...

Hello,

There are a couple of things that bother me about this piece.

It seems as though there are unfilled white spots on the canvas, & the black on the eyes seems too abrasive, perhaps you should have used a softer shade?

Aside from that it seems like a nicer surreal piece!
Thanks,
- Celx

InsertFunnyUserName responds:

I agree about the eyes. I tried to make eye lashes, but eh, didn't work out as well as I hoped. A lighter shade is a good idea.

And yeah, I'll make sure to watch out for white spots.

Thanks for the review

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To get full respect from this picture I suggest that the viewers click on it to view it at it's full size. It really shows how much work and detail was put into it.

It's a great picture, but I think that the change is too sudden. Is there a way that you could have made the change a little more subtle because it's really just one face and then another face, but at a much deeper level we know it's not like that in real life. If someone is double faced in real life then there are the two different sides, but somewhere in the middle it's more of a mix of characteristics and emotions. It can almost represent a struggle for a person to find out who they really are and it's as never as clear as you have represented it here.

Where it splits also isn't directly down the middle. I don't know if that was on purpose or if you meant it by there is more good in a person than there is bad in a person. If it wasn't meant to be like that then I guess I am complaining a tad bit about how it isn't split down the middle of the face.

Off of the negatives though. I really love the use of red in the hair far to the right. It's almost out of place, but yet at the same time very fitting. It's hard to explain, but maybe it can be explained that even with good there comes some bad, but it's not always a bad thing.

The face structure made me a little confused as I couldn't tell if it was a girl or a guy with really long hair and girly like features.

So overall, I feel that it could have been a bit more symmetric and that a more subtle blend in the middle could have given it a deeper meaning. I do feel that it's a piece that people can allow themselves to imagine what it means to them and it might be different for everyone. I won't take any points off for the minor things that I spoke of.

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InsertFunnyUserName responds:

Subtle blend is a good idea and yeah, the face is a bit disproportionate.

Thanks for the review :]

coolness

I definetly think the face needs a lil' work, but as far as the painting, your pretty killer. Keep up the work yo :D

InsertFunnyUserName responds:

Thanks.

Yeah, I don't like the eyes and the face is a little too wide, but overall I'm happy with the way that it came out.