Nice start. There are a few story glitches, like when I left the bathroom before getting caught, the story continues as if I did get caught. Also, it would be nice to give the landlady a name, no one calls someone "landlady."
Nice start. There are a few story glitches, like when I left the bathroom before getting caught, the story continues as if I did get caught. Also, it would be nice to give the landlady a name, no one calls someone "landlady."