A little random to figure out xP
But, overall quite decent. Some joints and anatomy parts seem a bit off. But most of them look pretty good. Bit odd penis design. But, it works. and very... bland vulva design. You really need to put some effort into learning female genitalia.
Guessing the music isn't intended to loop?
The background is however nice. And the style looks good as well. It's a quite solid average.
Also, noticed you said you "have a few spots open" commission wise. Just a tip but: When you have a backlog of 10+ months old commissions... you should PROBABLY try to finish those before taking new ones.