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Reviews for "A lawyer explains marriage and divorce | Man Paradise"
This animation looks like the result of a passive-aggressive guy letting his personal problems influence/ruin his potential talent. Sorry that your life sucks, bro. But this animation was just cringe-worthy. There is some talent, but you REALLY need to find better inspiration for your creations. This was neither funny, nor was it the least bit offensive. This was just.. sad.. =\
ManParadise responds:
I-Zombie,
Thanks for the feedback. I think this scene is not the best on it's own (out of the 20 minute animation) but perhaps when the full episode is out it'll seem more in place.
When you say "there is some talent" can I ask what you are referring to? This is my first animation so would appreciate the feedback on where I am going right and wrong.
Thanks again.
I'm down for any type of humor no matter what kind, but this just isn't funny. I don't even mind the bad art, the writing is just bad. I'd say instead of turning this into a series, work on more shorts and find out what style of comedy is your strong suit.
1 star for decent voice acting and having enough ambition to finish a cartoon