So a bunch of dudes decide to exorcise some (rather hot) ghosts, and it fails miserably, and then we wake up and realise it was all a dream.
...or was it? Because those knockers looked real enough at the end.
Still, if you wanna improve your stuff in the future, how about skipping the random skits of turd-related stuff and N-words? They're neither funny nor shocking, meaning they're a waste of both your and the audience's time. I appriciate that you're trying to go for the quick-fire route, but if it isn't funny... then it's not funny.
Still, the animation is spot-on, the pacing is excellent and the "real world" segment wasn't too jarring. I can tell that there's some serious skill involved in this. I just wish it was... funnier. It is exciting, but sadly it's not funny... 3.5 from me.
Reviews for "DREAM-SHOT GHOSTS"
Decent I guess. Your voices are solid, the graphics aren't bad, but this animation's humor went way over my head. Silly faces and boobs just didn't do it for me. Moreover the animation aspect of this short isn't exactly great either. You use good camera effects and sounds to give the animation some juice factor but in terms of frame by frame animation this is pretty basic. The lack of lip syncing is also a real letdown.
I feel like you grew up watching Garry's Mod machinimas.
Well.... I didn't 'grow up' watching them, but, yes, I was definitely influenced.
blarg, i just want to know what all that writing hidden in the end says ><
A bit odd for my tastes but, got to hand it to you on the animation and use of themes. Quite the good animation overall.