This is a good game. I really like the story and the interactions. However, I think it could be better. I noticed some minor spelling errors in the game. Furthermore, i think that the relationship between White Locus needed to be handle better. No offense, but I find a teacher student romantic creepy. So I avoided all romantic interactions and still got a romantic ending. It would be better if the relationship was between two masters instead. I also think you should have the option to avoid romance. Besides that, its still a great game full of wit, humor, and even heart. Good job.