Nice but a bit too predictable.
It would work nicer if there were no horror foreshadowing with the weird envelope and too many other hints and the horror part started more unpredictably in a from dusk to dawn style.
Reviews for "Help Wanted: Must Be Human (2016)"
MeghanLuna responds:
Thanks! Being subtle is always a good thing to have in stories. Let the viewer figure things out, let them experience it organically. Better than it being shoved in your face for sure. I'll try my best to keep this in mind next time!
very good character designs and great sound editing I love it
MeghanLuna responds:
Ah! Thank you! Oho, I'll tell my sound designer that!
so there was no solution to the original problem.
An improved ending to me would be if after freezing the bunnyman, the girl would explore his office and find a suitcase with "big moneys" in it and leaves startled yet reliefed.
MeghanLuna responds:
Ah yeah, wrapping up the story was definitely my weakest point in this. Haha, she could have taken his place and been the new boss making the moneys.