As expected a medium to high quality game.
The side quests are nice as they develop the characters and provide extra content.
I've never reviewed before but this time I have the say it: Your English is terrible. I cringe at every dialog at every scene. You need to get someone to review it, it's too many mistakes for it to be enjoyable. It completely breaks immersion as the characters themselves are not foreign.
Seriously get someone to cover the English.
A very positive point was how this time there was a pussymon with a slightly different anal scene. You need to vary them more than just re-use the same animation as for the pussy scene.
Also a little bit of exploration might not hurt, this Chapter was pretty straight forward. You did not have night cycles that mattered to the pussymon that showed up, nor did you have it matter what pussymon you defeat in order to get either train or care points, that removes even more thinking.
Sex games like this aren't meant to be a big hard puzzle to get some little gratification but still, this chapter was pretty dumbed down.
I'll still watch every episode and still have you on favorite authors ;)
Cheers and kep up de good work.