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Reviews for "Nejire Hadou Hentai"

total crap no offence but needs alot of work on art, voice attachment and body movement

Here to offer some support! I see the potential, and hope you'll continue to make animations! Making mistakes isn't a problem, but learn from them!

I will say the animation is fluid and your line work is really good. HOWEVER, the anatomy on this is extremely flawed. Like the pelvis is screwed up and she has like no rib cage. Her body is so deformed if you look closer at it. Here are some pelvis examples. https://www.google.com/search?biw=1600&bih=770&tbm=isch&sa=1&q=pelvis+anatomy+references&oq=pelvis+anatomy+references&gs_l=psy-ab.3...7446.11365.0.11520.13.12.1.0.0.0.139.1150.7j5.12.0....0...1.1.64.psy-ab..0.3.269...0j0i30k1j0i8i30k1j0i8i13i30k1.4erPyj82lr8#imgrc=4VIKipaO80aPEM:

and here's a lil tip on how it should kinda look
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/28d83c6b32897d999929c3cd9d26be73

Please try to practice and learn how pelvises work. I believe you can improve

it's not bad, the artwork is great, but it seems a bit stale. Still keep up the good work, not bad for a first!