Oh Jack. I have really mixed emotion about your last episode of Phantom Reverse. To explain my feelings about it i must use SPOILERS so for fresh people, play this game before read my comment. Also i will interact with past episodes.
The ending is... dissapointing. No big revolution or something. The teacher want revenge for her son, who died accidently was the center of this chaos? Also teacher lose her life ,because she has no support from other sources like friends or even husband - i know you dont show fathers so much, but there is so much complicated situation what make totally chaos in this ,, universe ". Literally she must be total psycho to avenge her son, what make me thinking you really make her psycho character, even if she doesnt look like that.
The heroes showing lack of real emotions like robots. Your past works are full of funny moments, real emotions and problem. There we have something that shoudnt occur. Basically our protagonist is like big hero without his own mind. Melanie instead of giving him kiss for save, she just move with him like RPG company only to provide cheers. I can see you trying to make something with them but at the end they didint looks well - surely it was my feeling and i think its most inaccurate to say that.
Time travel - oh God ! I really was confused so much. I understand how it work but i feel you experimenting to much with each cage of your poject but its show like you cut half of this, copy another and mixed together. Julius could move past to moment where his family die or do something to not allow Asa die ( also giving it to our protagonist ) But i feel it cannot occur for some reason - lack of information how it work - i belive it must be it.
If i put everything together, about discovery of this secret, heroes, moment of uncertainty - my score is average 2,5/5
This episode wasnt so bad to score below 2,5 but isnt good to score highter. I didint want to show how bad this episode was but how was complicated to feeling that.
For me - i really thinking about Melanie being this evil one ! - but i was so wrong i see :V i really check for some unexpected twist.
At end - i think You will make in future some experiments even changes to improve your endings if i can say like that. Unexpected twist, real dangerous, heroes who die or back to life, even their support what make heroes more valuable. Well you dont need to make just easy plot where one borrow 5 dollars from another character and didint give it back , then the person change to totally killer, because main protagonist didint give back 5 dollars. That funny but its show how it funny is.
Well im still waiting for you future project and i will wait for much more - secretly, brutality and twisted plots !