Make more!!!!
I thik I like this one becuse I have always been in to the paranormal,also I like of the the paranormal refrences you made like the diffrences between ghosts ,demons and sprits ect.
So keep up the good work I hope to see the rest of this.
Thanks, I will be making more, there's still more to the story. Yeah, there's just something so interesting about the paranormal.
pretty good
it could have been longer.. and i thought the reason their voices had no experesion is because they were just dead, good job
Good point. Ghosts probably don't get so emotional...emotions are a human trait.
Great idea!
Original. I think you should have used Flash's alpha effect insted of light blue for the ghosts; personally, I think that would have looked better... your voices were horrible, there was no emotion in it at all. That thing at the end about getting a job could be very dramatic indeed if it were said right. Like pauses. Realistic dialuge should have pauses. Just show some sort of emotion in your character's voices. Flat, even sentences just kill the mood. But still, nice work. Better than most of my movies, anyway.
When I had first started ghost motel(intro), a long time ago, I didn't know about the alpha stuff. Now that I do, I just left it that way since it was mostly all done like that. Also, because the ghosts/spirits are in the spiritual realm, they are not transparent, but in the physical world, the ghosts/spirits will look transparent. We'll work on the voices for next time, thanks for commenting.
Good Job
I liked it, but at the same time I didn't for a couple reasons. . .
1. It should be called Ghost HOTEL. . .not Motel. and Motel is with the rooms on the outside, the rooms are clearly on the inside. Ghost Hotel.
2. The voice acting is well. . .terrible. I dun know what it is. Like. . .the girl sounded fine. But everyone else just sounded fake, or annoying.
Other then that I kinda liked it! Awesome story! Can't wait for the sequal.
-Max
You're probably right about the motel/hotel thing. I wanted to call it a motel to imply that it was more for travelers passing through, rather than for vacationers enjoying a luxurious stay somewhere. Also, I have been to a motel that had called itself a hotel, so I was thinking that those words can mean pretty much the same thing. Thanks for pointing out about the voice acting, we're not actors here, but we will try to improve on the next one. :)
I like this one
and I am sure Ghost Motel 3 will eben get better! Nice work there.