Another good one. Much better than the third one which is the only one that's left me a bit disappointed - but this one made up for it. By the way, none of those bands on the posters are even close to death metal but I'll let it slip since you got some good ole Bay Area thrash metal in there with Slayer.
Keep up the good work!
Reviews for "Phantom Reverse #4"
JackAstral responds:
thanks! lol i just went off google for the bands srry
Is it me or the volume on this episode is much louder?
My review for the episode:
- The music was better and also timed better
- It was slightly short though
- There was one part where Melonie texts you the meme, and it's in the green bubble. It's a classic mistake but remember the green bubble from the right side means you're texting it, so maybe you could do a little switch
- I like the slight increase in comedy
- Lol is it just me who can tell that the letters on the locket are probably Caesar Cipher?
- Again, the running picture is slightly overused and the picture where the protag is looking scared
- And why does Julius keep punching us in the face
- K bye
This one was pretty good. You added some interesting supernatural and cryptic plot devices which are nice. I really like how you leave hints in the scenery of different locations. I really think this story has the chance to be your best one yet... Just thinking of all the details you could change with the use of time travel. You can have characters do a complete 180 in their
personality because they grew up; and something like, the future student council ruined their lives. In the form of a flashforward instead of a flashback This way you could have big twist from characters nobody suspects. This one has been great, all the details that developed in this episode. Julius's parents, now we know it was future Julius who saved them on the train. The cryptic message on the locket was cool i’m going to use the dial you showed in the textbook and use it on Juliu’s locket I hope there’s an easter egg here that would be soooo cool, but it’ll be just as interesting to find out that Julius’s parents had their own variation of the caesar cipher I’m really looking forward to the next one.
This story reminds me of something, but I can't quite tell what it is...Anyway! Another great VN! The music is great and it fits perfectly. Been with you since Dead Detention 1. Your drawings got a lot better, but I have to say that I liked the humour more in the earlier works. There's one thing I ask myself: So much shit happened at New Hearts High, why the hell are they keeping the school open? O.o
Btw, are you aware that your games can be found on other game websites? You've gotten quite poular!