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Reviews for "A girl you cant see"

The run animation was a little jonky compared to how amazing everything else was. Really great details and style. I love how everything sort of bends like we're looking at a dream world or something. Great music as well.

Now this was amazing!!!!!!!!!!

It looked really nice and you could tell the idea came from the heart. I like the simpsonwave you used, it gives this the right feel and atmosphere. I look forward to seeing more of what you can do.

DeadFlyFromMoon responds:

Thanks. Actually I was inspired by this track.

that was boring. the girl is boring. she has imagination and such but she has no sense of action. there was pretty colors here and there, but the whole thing did nothing emotionally for me.

i know how hard you worked, and i know its a struggle to make cartoons, but damn make them visually funny or interesting or scary or psychologically moving please.

try and say something with your work.

Art was fantastic but the animation could use a little work in some places, specifically the walk cycle in the beginning.