Nice job, i like it
Nice job, i like it
It definentally needs music, and some pickup objects. Without that, it won't be very encouraging for players to keep playing. I would suggest changing the name to "Linear Demo" in the mean time. So that people will understand that it isn't complete. Overall this game does have potential, it just needs a little work.
really seems on finnishid
If I had to describe this game in a few words, it would be "jump...jump...jump..."
There's not much variety here, and that makes this feel less like a game and more like a slog. While the game has a nice look initially... everything looks more or less the same. This is a bit disappointing, as there are so many interesting mechanics and plenty of scenery you could deploy. For example, you could have made your character/obstacles able to change shape (on account of being... well... a line). You could have included all sorts of fun line drawings as well. This feels like the starting point for something good, but as a game itself is rather lacking.
It hurt my eyes. But none the less a good game.